• sugar_in_your_tea@sh.itjust.works
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    25 days ago

    Right, and a sales speech should be somewhat formal. It’s not like an essay or legal appeal, but it should be a lot more formal than a discussion at a backyard BBQ or whatever.

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      24 days ago

      I don’t know. I think it gets the point that the writer is a marketing or sales idiot across quite clearly if the grammar is bad too.